I have the beginning of a short story I have been working on for a few weeks...just looking for people who know what they're doing to tell me what they see. Not really fantasy.

Perhaps you should post it and see if you get any replies that you feel are intelligent...

Aaaahh...good to meet the wise master of all... let's have a cup of mead some time... It is rather long - will the text box handle about twenty 8.5 x 11 pages of size 12?

After some of my posts I'm beginning to feel that the text box can handle just about anything ;).

I'll try it, then. Thanks, o great wise masters of whom I have infinite knowledge to learn thereof...ehhh...
I'll try a new post. Read it - I believe it to be quite funny. Give me thoughts.

I'm pretty sure almost all (this is excluding my bro) SP members will not critisize your story too much...