Author in need of help

Wordplay · Mon, 14th Oct '02, 7:00pm

First of all, the name of my work is: "Secrets of Journals" and it´s pretty much like a collection of diary entries, all of them forming a complete side story, and in certain points altering the true story. Now this piece of work is almost finished and in need for comments(+grammar check).
Interested? E-mail to hopeinen@suomi24.fi or leave your reply here.

There are two versions of the story: erotic and non-erotic. Please tell which one you wish to have if you´re interested.

[ November 02, 2002, 19:56: Message edited by: Taluntain ]

Taluntain · Mon, 14th Oct '02, 9:11pm

Well, send it to me once you're done with it and I'll put it up on SP for people to download...

Khazraj · Tue, 15th Oct '02, 12:29pm

If you would like to have help with the English then send me it at

abu_aftab@hotmail.com

Cheers

Falstaff · Fri, 25th Oct '02, 5:25pm

If you want me to take a look at it, I will - I am working on a MA in English.

Louthor · Thu, 31st Oct '02, 11:25pm

Oh oh! Im really good at making stories send it to me at d.pay@ntlworld.com and I might even have some ideas on how to improve it!

[ October 31, 2002, 23:26: Message edited by: Louthor ]

Wordplay · Fri, 1st Nov '02, 12:15pm

Louthor, I do not think so. No offence meant, but the person I´m seeking for must be a bit more mature. If you wish to send comments, read the story when(and if) it comes to SP. Thanks anyway of your interest.

Btw: I believe you meant "fluffy", not "fulffy."

[ November 01, 2002, 17:35: Message edited by: Virne ]

Louthor · Sat, 2nd Nov '02, 2:05pm

Mature? Im not taking offense but I am mature. Im 13 and most people think Im at least 20. I can do good storeis and I still may have some good ideas even though I am a kid.

Wordplay · Sat, 2nd Nov '02, 5:37pm

Louthor, I do not believe you could be a very
good commenter; look at what you have written!
In that short text of yours is already 7 typing
errors and 1 contradiction! C´mon, you´re from
England! 8 mistakes in three phrases!

Anyway; the story can be loaded from tips, tricks
and hints -section. If someone wishes to discuss
of it(any issue), put a request for topic to here.
I´ll create it then(-if- someone is interested...)
Just remember, whatever SP´s description says,
that it´s -not- the story of BG!

Hmm...Why did they put it to that section? It
would had fitted better to fantasy fiction...
Really, does it look like a hint-booklet?

[ November 03, 2002, 11:48: Message edited by: Virne ]

Taluntain · Sat, 2nd Nov '02, 7:55pm

Since it's directly connected with the game and it is full of spoilers, it's quite fitting that I put it there. And if you want to submit a better description, feel free to send it in and I'll fix it with the next update.

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Mon, 14th Oct '02, 7:00pm	#1
Wordplay Est unusquisque faber ipsae suae fortunae Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: --Gone-- Posts: 3,453 Like: 0 Liked 0 Times in 0 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 7,449 Level: 26 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 30.49% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 1.73% Achievements	First of all, the name of my work is: "Secrets of Journals" and it´s pretty much like a collection of diary entries, all of them forming a complete side story, and in certain points altering the true story. Now this piece of work is almost finished and in need for comments(+grammar check). Interested? E-mail to hopeinen@suomi24.fi or leave your reply here. There are two versions of the story: erotic and non-erotic. Please tell which one you wish to have if you´re interested. [ November 02, 2002, 19:56: Message edited by: Taluntain ]

Mon, 14th Oct '02, 9:11pm	#2
Taluntain SPS Account Holder Founder Resident Alpha and Omega Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Cori Celesti Posts: 20,798 Blog Entries: 13 Like: 151 Liked 120 Times in 78 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 53,135 Level: 58 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 48.71% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 49.01% Achievements Awards	Well, send it to me once you're done with it and I'll put it up on SP for people to download...

Tue, 15th Oct '02, 12:29pm	#3
Khazraj Gems: 20/31 Latest gem: Garnet Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Melbourne Australia Posts: 1,257 Like: 0 Liked 0 Times in 0 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 3,629 Level: 19 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 27.47% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 1.73% Achievements	If you would like to have help with the English then send me it at abu_aftab@hotmail.com Cheers

Fri, 25th Oct '02, 5:25pm	#4
Falstaff Sleep is for the Weak of Will Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 923 Like: 0 Liked 0 Times in 0 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 2,425 Level: 16 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 16.56% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 1.73% Achievements	If you want me to take a look at it, I will - I am working on a MA in English.

Thu, 31st Oct '02, 11:25pm	#5
Louthor Gems: 1/31 Latest gem: Turquoise Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: England Posts: 17 Like: 0 Liked 0 Times in 0 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 420 Level: 7 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 42.14% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 1.73% Achievements	Oh oh! Im really good at making stories send it to me at d.pay@ntlworld.com and I might even have some ideas on how to improve it! [ October 31, 2002, 23:26: Message edited by: Louthor ]

Fri, 1st Nov '02, 12:15pm	#6
Wordplay Est unusquisque faber ipsae suae fortunae Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: --Gone-- Posts: 3,453 Like: 0 Liked 0 Times in 0 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 7,449 Level: 26 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 30.49% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 1.73% Achievements	Louthor, I do not think so. No offence meant, but the person I´m seeking for must be a bit more mature. If you wish to send comments, read the story when(and if) it comes to SP. Thanks anyway of your interest. Btw: I believe you meant "fluffy", not "fulffy." [ November 01, 2002, 17:35: Message edited by: Virne ]

Sat, 2nd Nov '02, 2:05pm	#7
Louthor Gems: 1/31 Latest gem: Turquoise Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: England Posts: 17 Like: 0 Liked 0 Times in 0 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 420 Level: 7 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 42.14% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 1.73% Achievements	Mature? Im not taking offense but I am mature. Im 13 and most people think Im at least 20. I can do good storeis and I still may have some good ideas even though I am a kid.

Sat, 2nd Nov '02, 5:37pm	#8
Wordplay Est unusquisque faber ipsae suae fortunae Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: --Gone-- Posts: 3,453 Like: 0 Liked 0 Times in 0 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 7,449 Level: 26 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 30.49% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 1.73% Achievements	Louthor, I do not believe you could be a very good commenter; look at what you have written! In that short text of yours is already 7 typing errors and 1 contradiction! C´mon, you´re from England! 8 mistakes in three phrases! Anyway; the story can be loaded from tips, tricks and hints -section. If someone wishes to discuss of it(any issue), put a request for topic to here. I´ll create it then(-if- someone is interested...) Just remember, whatever SP´s description says, that it´s -not- the story of BG! Hmm...Why did they put it to that section? It would had fitted better to fantasy fiction... Really, does it look like a hint-booklet? [ November 03, 2002, 11:48: Message edited by: Virne ]

Sat, 2nd Nov '02, 7:55pm	#9
Taluntain SPS Account Holder Founder Resident Alpha and Omega Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Cori Celesti Posts: 20,798 Blog Entries: 13 Like: 151 Liked 120 Times in 78 Posts vBActivity - Stats XP: 53,135 Level: 58 vBActivity - Bars Level Completion: 48.71% Daily Activity 2.55% Weekly Activity 0.73% Monthly Activity 49.01% Achievements Awards	Since it's directly connected with the game and it is full of spoilers, it's quite fitting that I put it there. And if you want to submit a better description, feel free to send it in and I'll fix it with the next update.